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I would walk from pole to pole
Bring back treasures from the ice
I would give them all to you
For your smile, it’s a small price.

I would fight down screaming hordes
With no-one at my side
I would face their undying wrath
If your smile would reach your eyes.

I would step onto the oceans
Walk the path across the sea
I would dance upon the wave crests
If on my return, you’d smile for me.

I would risk hell’s deepest pits,
No fear of fire or the flame
If I could remember your true smile
And see on your face, the very same.

I would climb the highest mountain
Catch a star within my hand
And bring it flaming, to your doorstep,
If you’d smile as there I stand.

But I can’t even find the words
At the right time, in the right place
So what good am I at doing this?
I can’t put that smile back on your face.

But think of these, these strokes of ink
They’re everything I mean to say
About how I know I might be no use
But I wish I could help you smile, anyway.
©2008-2009 *beyondweird
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I miss the true smile of some of my good friends.

They don't deserve to be unhappy.

I can't tell people what I want to say, but give me a pen and paper, and this is what I want you all to know.
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As unimaginable insignificant as I am, too you, this poem made me smile.

Thank you for sharing it.
among the words and in between the lines your caring thoughtful ways do make a smile - sometimes it just hard to say the right words - take care :butterfly:
Aw Jenni. This is truly lovely *hugs*
That's such a beautiful poem...I loved it! =)

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'Shoot for the moon. Even if you miss, you'll land among the stars.' ~ Les Brown
Thank you for your lovely comment, it made me smile too :)

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Thank you very much, same to you :)

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:glomp: I'm glad you like it :)

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I'm glad you did :)

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But I don't want to criticise it!
It's beautiful!

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