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Some days I stare up into blue
Some days I sit and think of you
Some nights I dream of flying free
Some nights I wish for you and me

Sometimes I dance upon the sky
Sometimes I smile and you are why
Somehow I find myself in space
Somehow I can't forget your face.

Some words I write for worlds unknown
Some words I know I should leave alone
Some things I say are of starlight's dance
Some things I think are about romance

But always, my head will remain high above,
And always, my heart will cry out for love.
©2008-2009 ~beyondweird
:iconbeyondweird:

Author's Comments

Written whilst avoiding the outdoors today.

Well, two verses of it anyway.

Jen

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:iconruby-raquelle:
I love it
I especially like the way two lines are started with the same thing, then the next two with a different...if you catch my drift.
And it flows really well too!

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'The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams.' ~ Eleanor Roosevelt

'Shoot for the moon. Even if you miss, you'll land among the stars.' ~ Les Brown
:iconbeyondweird:
Thanks very much, and yeah I know what you mean :)

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We demand rigidly defined areas of doubt and uncertainty! - Hitchhikers Guide To The Galaxy
:iconpsychotic-tacman:
Quite like the structure of this tis great. Sixth line seems a little odd though, or that could be me being tired and not reading it proper.

Still tis a good one.

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Cheers, Martyn.
:iconbeyondweird:
It probably is a little odd tbh, I need to double check - thanks :)

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We demand rigidly defined areas of doubt and uncertainty! - Hitchhikers Guide To The Galaxy
:iconlittlemissdanni22:
I think this is amazing!
well worth the fav
i adore this jen :D

Danni x
:iconbeyondweird:
Hehe, thank you very very much :)

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We demand rigidly defined areas of doubt and uncertainty! - Hitchhikers Guide To The Galaxy
:iconspecialben:
I like this :-) Shows how your hearts torn between your love for this boy & your desire to be free. Its kinda bittersweet tbh...but yes, I do like it :-)
:iconmacowl:
nice nice nicely done


this is brilliant
the structure is styled greatly
love it
=]

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- Michael -

"If you are so set on running...Hadn't you best be off?"
:iconbeyondweird:
Bittersweet is my speciality, my dear =P Thanks :)

--
We demand rigidly defined areas of doubt and uncertainty! - Hitchhikers Guide To The Galaxy

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